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The ending of the poem is what grabbed my heart the moment I read it. It reminded me of the Helen Keller quote,
“When one door of happiness closes, another opens; but often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one which has been opened for us.” It is so true that we stare at what once was so long and so often, we completely forget that there might me other, better options out there - that there are other stars out there to wish on. That there are other people in the world to meet, other jobs to take. We want the world to be ours, yet we do not see the whole world as it is...
posted by
NiteTide
on August 13, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 10, 2010 at 10:56 PM
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poignantly moving, Sinome..it is sad when a love relationship
comes to a close like this, with no hope of revival.
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posted by
Rumor
on August 10, 2010 at 8:53 AM
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beautiful melancholy
is something only you can do so well - gorgeous poem sweetie xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on August 10, 2010 at 8:04 AM
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actuality
many don't want to believe that love do fade away, so they live lies
posted by
YBSP1
on August 10, 2010 at 7:37 AM
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Sinome
P Apparently the substance of love turns into substantial poetry love. .BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on August 10, 2010 at 6:44 AM
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its sad when love has to come to that
posted by
Lanetay
on August 9, 2010 at 11:52 PM
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Sad, but often true thoughts
that we have all felt sometime in our lives. Great writing.
posted by
SpitFire70
on August 9, 2010 at 10:36 PM
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SAD BUT PRACTICAL ...WHEN IT'S OVER IT IS DONE....I LIKE HOW YOU ARE
TRYING SOMETHING ELSE NOW AND AGAIN.
posted by
Kabu
on August 9, 2010 at 8:36 PM
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How sad Sinome, such a poignant poem.
posted by
shobana
on August 9, 2010 at 8:28 PM
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Sinome
A sad lovely poem but love is still here luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 9, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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Letting go of one another can be so tough.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 9, 2010 at 1:57 PM
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your breaking my heart, good poem,Utah Jay
posted by
UtahJay
on August 9, 2010 at 12:54 PM
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Sinome
To wish upon a star is believing in your hearts desire and love is always the memory stamped upon your soul. Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on August 9, 2010 at 12:54 PM
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So sad Simone. Life is sad for many people. Happiness is really a luxury. A very nice poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2010 at 11:51 AM
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Sinome
R And hope that the star will change into the sunshine of our lives love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on August 9, 2010 at 11:08 AM
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