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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 11, 2010 at 11:24 PM
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We all should awaken and seize the day! Fine imagery too, my Shobana! I love how you can paint a vivid picture in so few words! Bravo and love you dearly!!!! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on August 10, 2010 at 3:04 PM
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Shobana
As this passive lip I kiss upon these words of romantic awakening verse. nice job Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on August 9, 2010 at 1:26 PM
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Shobana
R More than words come from the mouth love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 9, 2010 at 11:09 AM
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Shobana, you are always full of life and your poems vibrate with it.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on August 9, 2010 at 10:05 AM
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oooh great word choice!
listlessness says it all!!!! wonderful write - well done!!!
posted by
lionreign
on August 9, 2010 at 8:28 AM
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This poem is exactly right for me today. I went to bed late, slept heavily, dreamed crazy dreams and woke myself up laughing out loud so heartily that the bed was shaking. First time I can remember that I woke myself up actually guffawing.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 9, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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Real laughter is welcome here too, preferred
...Hooting will work better than nothing...
posted by
mariss9
on August 9, 2010 at 5:52 AM
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Beautiful and lyrical! Thanks for your note Shobana; will be off line for a few days, and catch up by the weekend. Hope you're ok.
posted by
Nita09
on August 9, 2010 at 4:11 AM
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Re: Awaken
Hi CC, Thank you. Well, truly I don't know how to spell big words too..
I think we shall have to revert to Sam..sometimes she uses big words and I try to pretend I know the meaning before I check on it ..LOL.
posted by
shobana
on August 9, 2010 at 1:00 AM
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Awaken
A string of emotions here Shobana poignant whispers that encourage the reader to feel.
And I don't know how to spell big words, I think it is quite good, because the content invokes a reaction .
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2010 at 12:53 AM
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yes lustorlove..so right.
posted by
shobana
on August 8, 2010 at 10:56 PM
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sleep is hard to come by sometimes
posted by
Lanetay
on August 8, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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There awaken
Shobana: Wonderful poem/LBJ
posted by
MsJudy
on August 8, 2010 at 9:39 PM
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shobana, that is exactly how I felt when I met you!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 8, 2010 at 8:45 PM
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a happy poem indeed... but I do sense the same mystery Mindy spoke of... Its excellent my friend. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 8, 2010 at 8:23 PM
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Nitetide - LOL, oh don't worry!! I was a bit in the dark myself ..lol. You are doing just great here - ok.
posted by
shobana
on August 8, 2010 at 7:17 PM
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Deep and fascinating, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on August 8, 2010 at 7:13 PM
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Oh, Phew! I'm glad it was a happy poem! I must be in dark mood to see it in a dark light!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 8, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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Those feelings and acts are biding their time and will suddenly appear.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 8, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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Shobana
An enchanting, enigmatic poem...
posted by
Nautikos
on August 8, 2010 at 6:57 PM
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It sounds to me like something is lying dormant, waiting to be found...and yet there is wrath disguised behind the laughter? Perhaps a wait too long?
posted by
NiteTide
on August 8, 2010 at 6:54 PM
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