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Sinome
The source of love is Jesus for me and that was beautiful poetry luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 8, 2010 at 11:12 AM
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Gladly bound by freedom
Love is like the flow of blood ,it take you on a journey and you have to play catch up and deal with it, hopefully it's pleasant.
posted by
csherloc
on August 8, 2010 at 7:09 AM
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Beautiful
especially on a sunny Sunday morning
posted by
malcolm
on August 8, 2010 at 5:34 AM
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Lovely! The first sentence is so thought provoking!
posted by
Nita09
on August 8, 2010 at 4:05 AM
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Oh Marta, I came back to read this once more, because I absolutely adore it! But I must admit - I think I found a typo. The line -
yet , I would be overwhelmed by the beauty of it's song, - I believe should be written with "its" and not "it's" from the way you wrote it.
And Marta, I did reply back to you on my page, but I want to also write to you to say that I am so very lucky to have met you on here because no one has ever done something so lovely as frame my poetry. so thank you from the bottom of my heart.
posted by
NiteTide
on August 7, 2010 at 10:32 PM
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i love that line about being "gladly bound to freedom." A neat little play on words there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 7, 2010 at 5:22 PM
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You never cease to amaze me..Utah Jay
posted by
UtahJay
on August 7, 2010 at 10:06 AM
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Sinome
Z Nice work if you can get it love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 7, 2010 at 10:05 AM
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Freedom
The spirit within when Love abounds is overwhelming and this verse is very beautifully done. Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on August 7, 2010 at 9:30 AM
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Wow. WOW. I would have loved to have recited this poem too at the wedding yesterday!!!! This was a beautiful representation of love Marta. Absolutely stunning.
posted by
NiteTide
on August 7, 2010 at 9:24 AM
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Hm, Simone, Ill tell you a secret I write my comment and then delete it. Very nice as usual.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 7, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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It would probably render me deaf,
yet , I would be overwhelmed by the beauty of it's song,
I love this line.......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on August 7, 2010 at 7:45 AM
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