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posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 15, 2011 at 2:00 PM | link to this | reply

Amazing read!!! You really put the icing on the cake. Stand for you Deep!!!

posted by Mystereo on October 10, 2010 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully expressed Spitfire.  From my experience if you don't go or they don't go, you'll go down with them.

posted by yellowrose55 on August 13, 2010 at 5:21 PM | link to this | reply

Good for you
It's good that you're away from that situation now.  You'll be better for the leaving, and most likely more wary next time.  We all need learning experiences.

posted by Gloria48 on August 12, 2010 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

You Express yourself so beautifully and clearly....
I must say though it makes it hard for me to read one of your poems to the end as it stirs up feelings within that are difficult for me to feel again.  Your words have moved me.  Thank you.

posted by WaterKat on August 11, 2010 at 3:11 AM | link to this | reply

Hi, I like how you write. You're very interesting. Thank you.

posted by sunflowersis on August 10, 2010 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

Reading something more than once is sometimes a very good thing...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 10, 2010 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply

That was very poignant and I am in agreement that one must go for no good will come of it! sam 

posted by sam444 on August 10, 2010 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful work, my friend...excellent!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 9, 2010 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

It's not me
In just a few words you said it all.

posted by csherloc on August 8, 2010 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

It's not me
In just a few words you said it all.

posted by csherloc on August 8, 2010 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

& Too much in the way of your relationship love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on August 8, 2010 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

I have been in that situation.  I think this poem expresses the sadness well and is beautifully written.

posted by Amanda__ on August 7, 2010 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, All.
I know this is sad.

posted by SpitFire70 on August 7, 2010 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Very Eloquent and  revelatory 

posted by BrittWit on August 7, 2010 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

Spitfire
This is well done and exactly what you should do. To remain in a relationship in these two directions is a harm to both parties. Be blessed.

posted by Justi on August 7, 2010 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

/sf, it is sad indeed, but totally necessary.  Save yourself!

posted by dsm_tchr on August 7, 2010 at 12:45 AM | link to this | reply

This is sad though well written..

posted by Katray2 on August 6, 2010 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply

This Evokes a Feeling...
Of deep sadness.  

posted by WaterKat on August 6, 2010 at 10:41 PM | link to this | reply