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Even though I was a lazy kid, I always loved and admire a tidy room, yes I took a different take.
posted by
csherloc
on August 3, 2010 at 8:43 PM
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I LOVED IT A GREAT FUN READ AND WHAT A GOOD IDEA FOR POSTS
SOMETIMES ONE JUST RUNS OUT OF STUFF TO WRITE...THIS IS GREAT...AND NICE AND LIGHT.......OH THE JOYS OF GROWING UP AND THE JOYS OF BEING THE PARENT. NICELY BLENDED HERE I THOUGHT.
posted by
Kabu
on August 3, 2010 at 4:32 PM
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Fun read and nicely constructed
posted by
jfm32
on August 3, 2010 at 2:05 PM
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I don't know Spid, if you have all the answers. I just didn't like it when you were summarizing., I think a more clinical approach would have put you in a better light. You are doing this to make him into a more responsible adult. Nothing wrong with your poem. I do not wish to offend, but I feel this is a site that is pleasantly uninhibited.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 3, 2010 at 10:42 AM
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Yes it makes sense
Being the parent or the kid... tough on both sides some days!
posted by
Randir
on August 3, 2010 at 2:24 AM
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