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This poem is one I find to be beautiful. Things can change so quickly or so slowly.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 2, 2010 at 8:10 PM
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The perils of time do effect anything and everything, the only difference is the amount of time involved.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 2, 2010 at 5:33 PM
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Your inner eye is very perceptive! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 2, 2010 at 2:21 PM
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Exquisite, Shobana! Thanks very much for your comment and mail; will write tomorrow. Take care. Nita
posted by
Nita09
on August 2, 2010 at 8:51 AM
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shobana, a very beautiful and optimistic poem....
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posted by
Rumor
on August 2, 2010 at 7:22 AM
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Enchanting and just so lovely, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on August 2, 2010 at 7:13 AM
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shobana
RJ A beautiful play on light and words love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 2, 2010 at 5:01 AM
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Hi Shoban yes it's in your style and feels a little bit more hopeful and quite pleasant to read. I understand how the flowers appear and the sparkling. The pain is always oppressive and it is not disloyal to try to free oneself of this, your Daddy would wish you to be happy.C.C.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 2, 2010 at 1:05 AM
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Re: hey sweetie, nice poem ...
Hey Kabu, thank you darling.
posted by
shobana
on August 2, 2010 at 12:11 AM
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Re:
Sam, thanks ever so much. I am getting through..it will take time and I really hate the pain sweetie. I am glad you like the poem and love you too.
posted by
shobana
on August 2, 2010 at 12:01 AM
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What a refreshing poem and I loved the refrain! How are you? I do hope you are getting through your grief without too much pain! Love yo dearly my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on August 1, 2010 at 11:50 PM
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lovely poem, thanks
posted by
spiderfly
on August 1, 2010 at 11:47 PM
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Shobana, I liked your use of the word "breathing" when referencing the light. It reminds me of whoever it was who called wine, bottled light. Hey, BTW, I saw a bee today! My first one of the summer. Good work darling!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 1, 2010 at 11:19 PM
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hey sweetie, nice poem ...
posted by
Kabu
on August 1, 2010 at 9:56 PM
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Beautiful Shobana... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 1, 2010 at 9:39 PM
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Shobana
A nice post luv and thank you for your lovely comment in mine. Have a happy week
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 1, 2010 at 9:19 PM
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