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I read all. Never sceen a stylt like this so much going on. Good different
posted by
Mystereo
on October 11, 2010 at 8:19 AM
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I love your style and the cadence was perfect for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 25, 2010 at 12:33 PM
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I kind of got lost in the over-abundace of imagry. As i got into around the 7th and 10th line, got the feeling nothing would change, and I gave up on the rest of the read.You might want to consider talking to people as you would like them to talk to you. Poetry is kind of a personal conversation.
posted by
jfm32
on July 24, 2010 at 10:04 AM
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