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That place sounds like one that can clear one's thoughts easily.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 23, 2010 at 8:30 PM
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Like the place where my sister lives in Australia and where I hope to rest
for a few days of the Spetember fiasco.
posted by
Kabu
on July 23, 2010 at 6:21 PM
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That place down by the shore
There, where water meets land, you share in the cusp of reality, ever changing and ever static at the same moment. Lovely piece of work.
joab
posted by
joab3
on July 23, 2010 at 12:23 PM
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Always searching Simone, perhaps there isn't an answer, but one must continue looking, as always interesting.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 23, 2010 at 10:30 AM
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Wonderful
You take us to such beautiful tranquillity, this is superb xoxoxoxoxoxo
posted by
lionreign
on July 23, 2010 at 6:57 AM
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Sinome
´ I love to sit on the bench and watch the boats in beteen the marina and the ocean or just stop, eat. and look around at the marina stop love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 23, 2010 at 6:28 AM
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If I keep saying "hats off" I'm gonna get sunbured on my bald spot.
posted by
jfm32
on July 23, 2010 at 5:15 AM
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That Place--------------the shore
Every now and then I follow the thoughts of a writer and say--yes yes.
posted by
csherloc
on July 23, 2010 at 3:50 AM
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This is Literally......
Wonderful......
posted by
WaterKat
on July 23, 2010 at 1:07 AM
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Place down by the shore
A great poem Simone, wonderfully written and flows so smoothly/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 22, 2010 at 10:59 PM
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Where one dies another greatness begins
a great place to contemplate.
posted by
skye08
on July 22, 2010 at 9:25 PM
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You get a WOW. That was powerful.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 22, 2010 at 8:14 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 22, 2010 at 8:11 PM
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