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Very creative and give off a warm feel as you read, nice read.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 21, 2010 at 8:07 AM
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Aaj kal Sona bahut mehnga hai 'sprinkling' se he kaam chalana hoga.......
posted by
shamasehar
on July 23, 2010 at 4:06 AM
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This is beautiful, shamaji. If, instead of 'sprinkling' , it were to be gold sprinkled all around, I would so love to pick them up
, I have just poeted the ending of the sixth chapter.
posted by
anib
on July 22, 2010 at 11:05 PM
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wonderful poem :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2010 at 7:53 PM
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Dawn of Hope
I saw that picture----it's naturally beautiful
posted by
csherloc
on July 22, 2010 at 3:38 AM
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Dawn of hope
Wonderfully written..I loved your poem/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 21, 2010 at 11:49 PM
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Lovely and uplifting!
posted by
Katray2
on July 21, 2010 at 5:31 PM
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This is just a beautiful image Shama, most beautiful.
posted by
shobana
on July 21, 2010 at 5:30 PM
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Wonderful imagery; I loved sprinkling gold all around! GREAT!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 21, 2010 at 1:34 PM
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posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 21, 2010 at 1:27 PM
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A DAWN OF HOPE
Amen. This world needs all the hope it can find. joab
posted by
joab3
on July 21, 2010 at 1:20 PM
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