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Hmmm - what a vivid imagination of course CC - I can't help but giggle often with these reads because you truly are so creative with the story - now an elephant with beer  - I wonder? and I'm certain it happens.  I have been to a circus about 2 - no 3 times and I thoroughly am mesmerized each time.  with it all - with every single person, animal - trick et al.  Write on dear CC - EE

posted by elysianfields on July 22, 2010 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

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OK John what do you want me to be a disillusioned comedian. Anyway I preferred Hancock. 

believe me I find it hard to write anything typing with one finger and not the faintest idea how to spell long words like dslec dslex. Well you get the point and as you are comparatively young chap and I don't feel any peer animosity towards you, I do agree with your finer points, but as these things don't pay green gages and I often feel like climbing the apples and pears or thinking that I am going from worse to bad or the other way round, a concession had to be made, so I have changed the style a wee bit. Really it is your fault for not applying your talent until late in the series.      

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

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Hi Sam I bear with you but one can't bear all

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lol, give the elephant beer and get him drunk
Oh, no Tzippy we can't allow cruelty to animals inveigle  its way into the site. Thank you for calling. 

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

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I can ensure Bob I have vetted them all personally and I would willingly let one of the elephants walk over you, but it would be a pink one.

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

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Yes but little girls have to grow up quicker than boys FS.

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

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Good for you sweetie, just an example.  

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Oh, the plot deepens most interestingly, C.C...
Well Katray I did read somewhere that the elephants were becoming sozzled after a  fermented fruit intake and they were unsteady on their feet, I know the feeling  

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: you are a lotof fun you and your animals and alcohol and stuff.
Well Kabu it is a problem to keep thinking of the other thing, I think you would have been brill in a circus as the lady who skins snakes and eats them alive. That's an old saying from somewhere.

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

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Right Bill a knowing wink reveals all

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

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Well csherloc it isn't going to be exciting just a casual trip through memories.

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

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To be honest lionreign I know more about gypsies and showies did you know a low form of gipsy was called a hedge poker presumably that was where the bed was made. My father was a blood brother to a gypsy sounds romantic but one wonders about the knife. 

posted by C_C_T on July 22, 2010 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

I'm still gripped... I want to know what the circus people are like

posted by lionreign on July 22, 2010 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

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Very well written, it kept me wanting more of this story.

posted by csherloc on July 22, 2010 at 3:52 AM | link to this | reply

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& And a gesture now, using words sir. BC-A, Bill’s RTZst

posted by BC-A on July 21, 2010 at 10:29 PM | link to this | reply

you are a lotof fun you and your animals and alcohol and stuff.

posted by Kabu on July 21, 2010 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, the plot deepens most interestingly, C.C...

Beer for the elephant..:) nah, probably not a good idea!...  Very enjoyable read.

posted by Katray2 on July 21, 2010 at 5:37 PM | link to this | reply

LOL, enjoyed this CC and thanks for the visit. I am happy as can be CC :)

posted by shobana on July 21, 2010 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting off-beat rhyme, with a twist on the 4th quaters somehow squaring off. This is no iambic, and I'm not sure it works. It seems you are working with 2 rhythms, but they are not repetitively consistent. On the other hand, your comments are becomming a more interesting read. Have you been watching the re-runs of Benny Hill?

posted by jfm32 on July 21, 2010 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

Helen is experiencing way too much excitement there. At her age I would be worried myself, maybe even now.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 21, 2010 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

elephants and ponies
Good way to meet'em, if that's what you want to do, though I'm not sure
i'd enjoy their society much if they were hammered.The thought of a chummy elephant apalls me, but then that;s me.

posted by 2902 on July 21, 2010 at 3:05 PM | link to this | reply

lol, give the elephant beer and get him drunk
i like the way you put the story together :)

posted by Tzippy on July 21, 2010 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

A gesture is a gesture, so beer me! lol sam

posted by sam444 on July 21, 2010 at 1:52 PM | link to this | reply