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Re: TAPS
Thank you!!  that makes me grin enourmously

posted by lionreign on July 22, 2010 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

Though I am late with the answers, I recognized them as a bee and a mine.
Very good!

posted by TAPS. on July 21, 2010 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign
Always!

posted by lionreign on July 21, 2010 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: You are a dear friend and you write great poetry...that's who you are.
Thank you so much

posted by lionreign on July 21, 2010 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444
Thanks sam, it seems I am a little more obscure than I intended

posted by lionreign on July 21, 2010 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Obscurity
Thank you LB, I'm glad you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on July 21, 2010 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Corncrake

Actually you were extremely close the answers were:

 

Verse 1: A Bee

Verse 2: A Mine

 

Answer: Bee Mine (an exercise in obscurity)

posted by lionreign on July 21, 2010 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

lionreign

± I guess that we have to make a find in ourselves. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on July 21, 2010 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

You are a dear friend and you write great poetry...that's who you are.

posted by Kabu on July 20, 2010 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

For me it was a chaotic wanderer looking to discover who he is; or perhaps was!! Great imagery, too! sam

posted by sam444 on July 20, 2010 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

Obscurity
Very good poem, I am trying to figure out who or what it is, but have no answers/LB

posted by MsJudy on July 20, 2010 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

An underground mine. I was going to say minefield but that's where mines were planted. 

Sorry I can't help guessing but I am not very good at it. 

posted by C_C_T on July 20, 2010 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply