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Re: Sam444
You read the revised one... I rewrote the second verse because it was too obscure
posted by
lionreign
on July 22, 2010 at 6:38 AM
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I thought I had commented on this poem but it eludes me now! Anyway, a wanderer looking for a place to rest! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 21, 2010 at 3:03 PM
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Re: Corncrake
You are remarkably close and thanks
posted by
lionreign
on July 21, 2010 at 7:06 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thanks you! Your feedback was very valuable and led me to rewrite a little
posted by
lionreign
on July 21, 2010 at 6:53 AM
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Hmm I wonder if this first one is a wasp and the other oil. Interesting poem Lionreign I realize I have probably got it wrong.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 20, 2010 at 11:39 AM
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Hm.This is a puzzle. I think you could be a leopard or a tiger, but there again, you might be oil or coal! great poem anyway.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on July 20, 2010 at 8:22 AM
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