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I love the use of persuasive winds and I want to get on that cloud, too! Beautiful imagery my Shobana! Just awesome! Love you dearly! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on July 21, 2010 at 11:40 PM
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Shobana - wow - your writing is fabulous as the imagery just pops and the whole of strength and passion speaks loudly. Write on... Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 19, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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Wonderful!
the imagery in this is superb and the sense of peace is a joy
posted by
lionreign
on July 19, 2010 at 7:45 AM
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Those cool, persuasive winds convince me more than a hard, heavy rain that hurts my skin. Well said.
posted by
mariss9
on July 19, 2010 at 6:52 AM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Wiley John for stopping by and you are most welcome.
posted by
shobana
on July 19, 2010 at 5:25 AM
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Hi CC, thank you and yes it is. Glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on July 19, 2010 at 5:06 AM
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Shobana quite a good idea how to calm a fevered brow. Yes a likeable poem possibly designed to calm the writer and intrigue the reader
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posted by
C_C_T
on July 19, 2010 at 1:05 AM
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Shabana
Wonderfuly written, loved it/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 18, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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shobana
Ë It moves magnificently love. BC-A, Bill’s RLLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 18, 2010 at 10:37 PM
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Shobana
Hold the cool weather luv and thanks for the peaceful poetry luv. Have a happy week
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 18, 2010 at 9:16 PM
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You have me singing again.
So often the poems that you write bring songs to mind. I love that.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 18, 2010 at 9:13 PM
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We could I think, thank you lustorlove.
posted by
shobana
on July 18, 2010 at 7:59 PM
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Cool !
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 18, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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we could all use a cool breeze
posted by
Lanetay
on July 18, 2010 at 7:48 PM
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I thought it was very good.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 18, 2010 at 4:56 PM
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Yes very calming and somehow hopeful
posted by
Kabu
on July 18, 2010 at 4:27 PM
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This poem serves as a calming influence for me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 18, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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Poignantly and beautifully expressed Shobana xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 18, 2010 at 3:53 PM
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