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Wonderfully written..flowing so smoothly/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 19, 2010 at 12:03 AM
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there is only three people who will care when I am gone, my kids
posted by
Lanetay
on July 18, 2010 at 11:39 PM
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Sinome
Ë Love in eternity love. BC-A, Bill’s RLLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 18, 2010 at 10:45 PM
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Sinome
"Back of tranquility lies always captured unhappiness."
(David Grazin) Beautiful and strong poetry. I do pray you are HAPPY luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 18, 2010 at 9:34 PM
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I feel a mix of chaos and tranquility while I read this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 18, 2010 at 5:03 PM
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It is indeed one of your very best Sinome..Just so melancholic and lovely. Thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 18, 2010 at 4:14 PM
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I'm not kidding, I think this is one of the most
beautiful and powerful poems I have read in years. Very nice.
posted by
SpitFire70
on July 18, 2010 at 3:35 PM
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Sinome
Each and every line so soulful and rich with emotion.
posted by
Troosha
on July 18, 2010 at 2:07 PM
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Beautiful but so sad Simone, I hope you do not really feel unhappy
posted by
C_C_T
on July 18, 2010 at 11:11 AM
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Very romantic and free-flowing, the cycle of life goes on. Going to heaven above the stars is my hope; it is a similar idea.
posted by
mariss9
on July 18, 2010 at 9:45 AM
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Wow, I've got tears in my eyes! What a beautiful poem!
posted by
steamfly
on July 18, 2010 at 9:22 AM
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It is unbelievable sometimes for the mind to grasp that the world will go
on witout us. Perhaps it is one reason that we write, one reason that I plant trees everywhere I live. Yes there will be roses and other lovers and other hearts broken. Oh I love your work.
posted by
Kabu
on July 18, 2010 at 8:03 AM
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~ simply heartfelt - thoroughly moving. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 18, 2010 at 6:34 AM
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