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Fear and anticipation all rolled into to one! A wing and a prayer, indeed! Have all the fun you possibly can! Love you 2! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on July 21, 2010 at 11:38 PM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Bill, Glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on July 18, 2010 at 4:11 PM
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Love your way with words, the waiting heart longs for that reuniting moment....
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 18, 2010 at 2:27 PM
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Before I read a comment you posted here I assumed you were waiting for someone to arrive. An engaging write!
posted by
Troosha
on July 18, 2010 at 2:22 PM
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Hopefully you are not waiting for Godot?
posted by
Straightforward
on July 18, 2010 at 10:53 AM
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Hi Shobana It won't be long now, but one cannot measure time in minutes when one is trying to pull it forward. Nice writing take it easy, it will be alright.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 18, 2010 at 10:41 AM
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Well now - this is beautiful. I was immersed with pleasure by each metaphor - strength in waiting and for Love - Shobana, it's great to be on for a bit and once again read your words. xoxox Elyse (hope and trust all is well)
posted by
elysianfields
on July 18, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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Shobana
{ This is a cute romance with nice words love. BC-A, Bill’sàRJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 18, 2010 at 5:44 AM
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wings of steel
Wonderful poem so beautifully written/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 18, 2010 at 1:37 AM
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Re: Wonderful Shobs
Hi abanerjee, how are you my friend? You know my daughter is coming back so I am just writing. From the heart I think dost..LOL. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 17, 2010 at 11:37 PM
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Wonderful Shobs
How do you do this?
I was thinking if I had to do poems as these, it wiuld be beyond me. Kudos! mere dost.
posted by
anib
on July 17, 2010 at 11:31 PM
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I will try to be careful lustorlove..LOL, thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 17, 2010 at 11:24 PM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Justi, God bless you too.
posted by
shobana
on July 17, 2010 at 11:23 PM
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FSI - you are right, thank you..my daughter is coming back for the holidays and I just can't wait for her to be here.
posted by
shobana
on July 17, 2010 at 11:21 PM
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Shobana, this is a very beautiful description of an anticipation of
arrival. I enjoyed it a bunch
posted by
Tzippy
on July 17, 2010 at 10:20 PM
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Shobana
We love that anticipation of you flying back here with a poetic post too luv. Well done.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 17, 2010 at 8:41 PM
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you have really captured the return of a loved one in this jet age.
posted by
Kabu
on July 17, 2010 at 7:57 PM
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Shobana
Full of eager anticipation - delightful!
posted by
Nautikos
on July 17, 2010 at 7:48 PM
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be careful
posted by
Lanetay
on July 17, 2010 at 7:28 PM
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Shobana
I love how you made real the fear, thankfulness, love, appreciation and the whole of feelings that the steel wings are bringing to you. God bless you lady.
posted by
Justi
on July 17, 2010 at 6:13 PM
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Wonderfully expressed anticipation, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on July 17, 2010 at 4:46 PM
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The waiting is the hardest part but at the end is all well worth it. Making it more brighter is that the wait can make it sweeter.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 17, 2010 at 4:35 PM
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