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Sinome
{ So through it all the light comes through. This is nice imagery love. BC-A, Bill’sàRJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 18, 2010 at 5:40 AM
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Sinome
Well seeing as how I quit after grade 8 I skip all the reunions luv.LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 17, 2010 at 8:57 PM
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well done .....a walk down the memory lane so to write.
posted by
Kabu
on July 17, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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Sinome
This is very good, and very thought-provoking! A real exhortation to reflect...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 17, 2010 at 7:52 PM
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I love it when my mind is taken back to the past.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 17, 2010 at 5:35 PM
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Such a lovely poem Sinome, full of hope leaving the old behind. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 17, 2010 at 2:49 PM
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walk into a picture
You found a way to say a thing I always thought was unsayable!!! You touched the point where poetry becomes magic. This resonates in places where I didn't realize I had places! (See? You've got ME trying to be poetic! ) You should be very proud of this poem.
posted by
2902
on July 17, 2010 at 12:43 PM
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What great writing. This is very special.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 17, 2010 at 11:00 AM
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Wow! Absolutely wonderful! 1st 4 lines brought me right in. (are you ready to accept the bane of phenominal poetry?)I usually don't like poems that tell me what to do or how to think, but that's only because they haven't suffered the experience to transform language--and one goes with the other. In this case (your poem) the window is so clearly definded, the exposition (rest of poem)puts the fragmented pieces back into the Big Window. In this sense, it would seem to be a document of your own break-through to your own self- understanding of spirituality (halleighluha.!... a word I like because I just found out how to spell it). I'm not sure your readers are going to follow you here, but I'll put this one up against anything I ever read! So there!
posted by
jfm32
on July 17, 2010 at 10:38 AM
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I wish I could go back and change some of those shadows Simone, but then I expect we all do a nicely thought out poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 17, 2010 at 7:38 AM
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You touch on the main reason......
I refuse to go to any Class Reunions......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on July 17, 2010 at 6:58 AM
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Sinome
 Ooh light in the shadows oh my! Have a nice weekend love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 17, 2010 at 6:40 AM
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