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Re: Helen
Thank you LB I know you like things like this. I know you can write good poetry, but it is hard to force what should flow fairly easily. What you are doing now is interesting and I am sure one day you will think hey I'll write a poem.

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Too cool...
Thank you Teddy have to chill out now 

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: They Call Me Helen
Thank you Ms Gomer and may I be the first to welcome you to this section. I suppose when we write our poems we become for a while what we write. I am sure Helen would be very pleased 

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: They call me Helen
Thank you Femia, don't knock me out, happy weekend MB. 

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

Helen
this is a wonderful poem/LB

posted by MsJudy on July 16, 2010 at 11:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FS
Thank you FS just a change to take it easy

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re:
Thank you Sam glad you liked it

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I love this poem, it is so simple, yet says so much
Thank you Tzippy she is part of a little family that I keep for comfort.

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCRAKE
Wiley I know I banged my head on the table after I'd posted. I thought that's Kabu's name and why Joan popped up I don't know. I feel almost afraid to post the next instalment. Anyway she is a nice little girl so perhaps a certain lady will not take umbrage  

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I came back to read formyself and it is top o the trees our friend.
Thank you so much Helen, sorry,take care Kabu .

posted by C_C_T on July 16, 2010 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

I came back to read formyself and it is top o the trees our friend.

posted by Kabu on July 16, 2010 at 10:06 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE
Beautiful is a good word but very well done and entertaining, I read it to Kabu (Helen Joan) and we had a wonderful laugh together. I will have to send a copy to my daughter Eileen now, even if I'm not quite certain why that name is in the poem. I am slow in the head sometimes. LOL

posted by WileyJohn on July 16, 2010 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

I love this poem, it is so simple, yet says so much
and most of all it is seen from the eyes of a child which is even more wonderful :)

posted by Tzippy on July 16, 2010 at 1:53 PM | link to this | reply

You do well talking like a ten year old...I enjoyed reading Helen's insights into the world around her.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 16, 2010 at 12:08 PM | link to this | reply

That was a fantastic story! So delightful and well written! sam

posted by sam444 on July 16, 2010 at 11:46 AM | link to this | reply

They call me Helen
Wonderful story and sad and very ensightful for the reader filled with the emotions as ones bowl is overfowing with warmth..I ring the Bell for you Mr. MB your friend Fema

posted by fememefeme on July 16, 2010 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

They Call Me Helen
You are a magnificent and extremely intelligent young lady. You are a gifted writer who will  no doubt become very wealthy doing what you love.

posted by Gomer on July 16, 2010 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

Too cool...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 16, 2010 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply