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I really like the descriptive language and imagery. Good on ya, as us Brits would say.
posted by
BrittWit
on August 5, 2010 at 10:48 AM
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now now such a pssion.. I like..and your stlye.. great
thankyou for you kind words. your work is outstanding.
posted by
manawar
on July 17, 2010 at 12:38 AM
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K You give a feel to the anxiety love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 15, 2010 at 10:50 PM
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Putting on a front such as that is so hard to do when turmoil is inside one's body.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 15, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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Excellent Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on July 15, 2010 at 2:54 PM
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Anxiety
I feel this poem, I have been there too/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 15, 2010 at 10:43 AM
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh You have described the 20 awful years of my life
and so vividly and with such depth of understanding. Amazing work dearest one.
posted by
Kabu
on July 15, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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I know people like that...
perhaps Sinome, you could write something more in your own captivating style to help alleviate their anxiety? - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 15, 2010 at 9:52 AM
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Superbly written
I think you captured the essence of anxiety perfectly xoxoxoxo
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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Hi Simone very dramatic the last two lines were really thrown together exceedingly well.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 15, 2010 at 7:28 AM
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