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Fantasies are so wonderful to have. I think everyone at some point has used them to get through the day.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 15, 2010 at 3:32 PM
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Re: Somethings
Thank you csherloc for stopping by and glad you like the poem.
posted by
shobana
on July 15, 2010 at 2:17 PM
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shobana, excellent little list on "somethings",
finishing up with a grand finale thought regarding "life" - true, what we do with it is all up to us..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 15, 2010 at 9:51 AM
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Complete in and of itself.
joab
posted by
joab3
on July 15, 2010 at 6:18 AM
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Somethings
I like the flow of your poem.
posted by
csherloc
on July 15, 2010 at 4:19 AM
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Shobana
Hi Shobana, sometimes fantasy is easier than life. I suppose it was called daydreaming it can feel comforting at times, well possibly . This is a good poem you let the reader hold your hand and then you withdraw it with a smile.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 15, 2010 at 12:33 AM
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Shobana
l Aah this is a beautiful poem in which fantasy turns into days love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 14, 2010 at 9:39 PM
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Somethings
Enjoyed reading your poem Shobana/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 14, 2010 at 9:24 PM
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i like that random pace change of words
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 14, 2010 at 8:40 PM
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Re: Profound, Dear Shobana..
Thank you Poetraye for your visits.
posted by
shobana
on July 14, 2010 at 7:43 PM
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Shobana
Wonderful as usual and true from the written words of the heart. Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on July 14, 2010 at 5:39 PM
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Profound, Dear Shobana..
posted by
Katray2
on July 14, 2010 at 5:05 PM
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shobana, so true, and poignant!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 14, 2010 at 4:45 PM
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Usually I'm amazed with fine closings, but this opening is as good as any close I have read! Just gorgeous imagery and a wonderful statement! It set the whole poem in motion and had me glued! SO KUDOS!!! And all my love, too! Your sam
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on July 14, 2010 at 4:25 PM
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Teddypoet hi, good afternoon to you and thanks so much for the visits.
posted by
shobana
on July 14, 2010 at 4:11 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 14, 2010 at 4:01 PM
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