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csherloc, so very true...I especially liked the fact you included
the "shy child", who, although maybe not so outgoing, has just as much to offer..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 15, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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thank you for your lovely comments.the poem is dedicated to a good friend of mine who has cancer.
posted by
motox
on July 15, 2010 at 3:36 AM
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Thoughtful poetry nicely written
posted by
C_C_T
on July 14, 2010 at 11:17 PM
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Ë Love works. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 14, 2010 at 10:05 PM
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So very true!
Excellent message.
posted by
Katray2
on July 14, 2010 at 5:03 PM
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What a fine message! I loved this stanza:
The more we love and bring out
The primary gifts of our young
The possibility of a rich and rewarding
Future can be won
sam
posted by
sam444
on July 14, 2010 at 4:55 PM
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How so very true. Excellent poem and one I can relate to.
posted by
shobana
on July 14, 2010 at 4:46 PM
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very good. I thought. It sounds like food for thought.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 14, 2010 at 2:13 PM
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posted by
SomeoneElse
on July 14, 2010 at 12:35 PM
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Such wise words, for our children will one day inherit the earth fromsu.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 14, 2010 at 12:13 PM
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Very well said...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 14, 2010 at 11:53 AM
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csherloc, right, makes me grateful for my own parents.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 14, 2010 at 11:48 AM
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