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Please take that little girl to Africa, I would like to see Africa too.

posted by csherloc on July 15, 2010 at 3:27 AM | link to this | reply

This is fantastic! The use of the refrain was so cool and it really gave the poem impetus and wonderful cadence! Enjoy your time! sam

posted by sam444 on July 14, 2010 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

that is a lovely poem to read over and over. It is timeless. Which is good.

posted by NIGHTWRITE on July 14, 2010 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply

it islovely and make sue that you keep this for her. Nice to have a week
off too.

posted by Kabu on July 14, 2010 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

Hi spid a sweet little girl's poem interwoven with the innocence, well of little girls I suppose.I guess you need a lie in after that move. We have just had a heavy storm no lightening just rain of course not enough, the trouble is so many gardens are concreted over that rain is forced down to the drains and sometimes has nowhere to go. I did noticed that building on gardens is going to be stopped. It will probably be the same where you are in a hundred years time.  

posted by C_C_T on July 14, 2010 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply