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mariss, this is your BEST! Wow, time travel. It's positively Vonnegution!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 3, 2010 at 3:16 PM
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to let the mind run freely into the past. I love it.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 14, 2010 at 8:49 PM
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I love trains that clickety clack ....how lovely your reverie was I so
enjoyed it all...clever to kill off the young soldier before having to think up too many details...that takes research...LOL not for a train ride.....I always make up stories about the people near me...if they only knew how exciting their lives really are. LOL
posted by
Kabu
on July 13, 2010 at 3:24 PM
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What a wonderful poem and how 3 dimensions in time could be woven together. I like the notion that I didn't exactly where I was or going and the suspence how this would work out, and I was wondering where I'd wind up, but the writing carried me thru to the end, and I thoroughly enjoyed the trip.
posted by
jfm32
on July 13, 2010 at 3:20 PM
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