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Re: Sam444
Thanks Sam!
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lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 8:23 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
i just passed it (finally)
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 8:20 AM
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Re: lionreign
LOL thanks Bill
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 8:17 AM
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Re: I know this guy sooooo well!
I think we all get to be him sometimes :D
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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Re: Crimson fool
thanks so much LB
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 8:07 AM
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Re: dsm_tchr
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 8:00 AM
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Re: sunburn
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks abanerjee, and you are absolutely right
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 7:52 AM
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Re: I thought it was only Mad Dogs and Enlishmen who go out in the
Well I am an Englishman and maybe a mad dog too :P
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 7:49 AM
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Re: Ouch, I couldn't have said it any better than Sinome just did! - Ash
thanks Ash
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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Re: Sinome
thank you so much dear - I'm afraid it was literal but I am on the mend now
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 7:43 AM
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Re: I can hear John Houseman's voice in this
ROFL!
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 7:37 AM
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This is very descriptive of what happened to my daughter! Excellent imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 14, 2010 at 10:37 PM
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You're talking about me again! I've now reached the peeling stage!
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on July 14, 2010 at 6:12 AM
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lionreign
@ You’re a hot guy. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 13, 2010 at 10:33 PM
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I know this guy sooooo well!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 13, 2010 at 12:37 PM
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Crimson fool
Very good poem..I enjoyed reading it very much/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 13, 2010 at 12:32 PM
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Oh yes, good idea!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 13, 2010 at 11:06 AM
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sunburn
Wonderful subject vividly treated! - catches the inside and outside consequences! (Add some scratchy sand and sweat, and you have a lively image of us kids coming back from Orchard Beach on the crosstown bus way back when. I still remember spooning vaseline onto the glowing brow of my friend Kelly, a (formerly) fair-skinned Irishman.
posted by
2902
on July 13, 2010 at 9:06 AM
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lionreign
To my understanding this was a soliloquy, directed inwards. And hence, brilliant!
posted by
anib
on July 13, 2010 at 8:50 AM
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I thought it was only Mad Dogs and Enlishmen who go out in the
Midday Sun. LOL take care friend of ours and put something on that burn and drink lots of water.
posted by
Kabu
on July 13, 2010 at 8:01 AM
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Ouch, I couldn't have said it any better than Sinome just did! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 13, 2010 at 7:55 AM
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You have expressed the punishment of sunburn so well :-) and these verses could be applied to so many other instances where we act foolishly without caring we could be "burned" at the end. Great poem Neil... Bravo! but if its literal and you are truly sunburned ...ouch! try ice and a cream containing aloe vera ... :-( Hope you feel better soon and have a wonderful tan to show for your daring :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 13, 2010 at 7:48 AM
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I can hear John Houseman's voice in this
We suntan the old fashioned way... We BURN it.
posted by
cpklapper
on July 13, 2010 at 7:20 AM
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