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I love the focus on the here and now that this poem concludes with.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 13, 2010 at 7:06 PM
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Sinome
Just how life is too and you do it so beautifully luv
.......The wetness that surrounds all
has no beginning , no end,.....
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 13, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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Your writing is like a microburst of beauty amongst the jejune.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 13, 2010 at 3:41 PM
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Sinome
Outstanding, dear Marta. This is so princess-like
memories are imperviously edged by the hands of time xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
anib
on July 13, 2010 at 8:53 AM
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I could read all your poems over and over again....rain we have it here
the last three days and I love it your poem just matched my mood.
posted by
Kabu
on July 13, 2010 at 8:04 AM
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Walking on a beach alone while raining is blissful...
and you capture it soo well Sinome dear. - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 13, 2010 at 7:51 AM
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never has rain sounded so good
wonderful sweetie xoxox
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:33 AM
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Sinome
Y Rain replenishes the soul love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 12, 2010 at 11:44 PM
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I thought it had been raining a lot Simone and then I saw rewrite, but it is so nice that one can walk through it again and again.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 12, 2010 at 10:57 PM
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I enjoyed reading it.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 12, 2010 at 6:11 PM
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Have I mentioned that you seem to be meeting your stride? The reason it's getting harder for me to comment is because the description is so rich, I thought I was there, and almost thought I had written it myself. Nothing meant, here, but the best compliment of all: the seemlessness of a poem where where the writer's and the reader's reality become one.
posted by
jfm32
on July 12, 2010 at 5:28 PM
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This poem has a terrific climax, good intro and reasonable conclusion. Good job!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 12, 2010 at 3:49 PM
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