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Re: Sinome
hahaha bet you'd have outraced us too :P
posted by
lionreign
on July 15, 2010 at 11:40 AM
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Of course I would have run of the road loll... I was too cute as a lil' girl for anyone to deny me what I wanted loll It would have been fun to be there with you :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 13, 2010 at 8:54 PM
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Re: Sam444
I think as we age we are allowed to wimp out a little
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:51 AM
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Re: lionreign
thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:43 AM
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Re: janey
Thank you so much! Isn't it funny how such things became a solid part of childhood? I am totally unpublished, I'm afraid, other than by winning competitions I'm at a loss at how to start trying to get in print
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:41 AM
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Re: Some times I have wished tobe a child again....I am glad mine was such fun
not sure I'd do it again, but the bits I recall were joyous
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:36 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
These days, true enough, but it seems that the late 70's and early 80's had days like that (in my memory at least)
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:34 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thanks sweetie
Would you have run on the road? xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:30 AM
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Re: summer
thank you - I think that burning feet is one of those summer sensations we all share in some way
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:29 AM
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Re: DARKSUMMER
thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2010 at 6:26 AM
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Outstanding! I could feel the pain for I had a taste of it today! My deck was hot today I could not stand it to water my plants! Of course, I was barefooted, just like the lads! But I am a wimp, I retreated quickly for I had nothing to prove, lol! What an awesome poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 13, 2010 at 12:01 AM
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lionreign
Y I see mastered much memory of imagery and feeling here. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 12, 2010 at 11:57 PM
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Made me think back to my childhood in Arizona. Summer's were so hot and we had so much fun trying to cross the road, sidwalk, whatever, without scorching our feet! So well written. Have you published any work?
posted by
janey_
on July 12, 2010 at 6:54 PM
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Some times I have wished tobe a child again....I am glad mine was such fun
posted by
Kabu
on July 12, 2010 at 1:13 PM
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I have occasionally known those days, although it's rarely hot enough here to make bare feet on tarmac the least bit risky!
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on July 12, 2010 at 12:49 PM
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Such sweet memories... I felt as if I were there with you... way back when... again a little girl. Superb Neil :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 12, 2010 at 10:59 AM
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summer
Very fine and vivid. A great choice of subject, too. My hotfoot memories are of Coney Island, mincing fast across the boardwalk to the relative relief of burning sand and then, ah, the water.
posted by
2902
on July 12, 2010 at 8:45 AM
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perfectly painted
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 12, 2010 at 7:42 AM
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