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Beautiful....
I love this one.
posted by
WaterKat
on July 16, 2010 at 3:31 AM
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Shobana
I was in a glass elevator once inside a hotel in Boston, now yours was far more poetic and romantic luv. Have a happy week
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 11, 2010 at 5:16 PM
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Beautiful and so romantic, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on July 11, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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Well At last Shobana I have been trawling through to reach you, but with trepidation We always say around these parts we don't mind how high we go as long as we have one foot on the ground. Were you as brave as you sound, sorry must not ask questions. I know that you are watching the football at the moment and I have got to think of something quickly.
You haven't walked along the wing of a plane? OK. Your style evokes a feeling of being there and it is a nice style to adopt. It is always likable. Where are you going to my pretty maid I'm going _a_ milking Sir she said. Shh!
posted by
C_C_T
on July 11, 2010 at 11:45 AM
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Last time I was in a glass elevator only went 2 stories which was hight enough for me. I'm definitely not ready for the stars yet!
posted by
jfm32
on July 11, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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Last time I was in a glass elevator only went 2 stories which was hight enough for me. I'm definitely not ready for the stars yet!
posted by
jfm32
on July 11, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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The night fosters such a wonderful feeling inside of the speaker. Something so refreshing exists when one is underneath those stars.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 11, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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Wonderful. I'm not sure I've been on a glass elevator at night, but I've watched the world below light up for the night in Paris from the top of Tour Montparnasse.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 11, 2010 at 6:54 AM
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Shobana
6 The feel’s good all around love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 11, 2010 at 6:19 AM
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Lovely poem. And yes, I've ridden such an elevator at midnight and found it exhilarating.joab
posted by
joab3
on July 11, 2010 at 5:57 AM
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Hi Sam, Lovely feeling isn't it. I am so glad you could reply to me!!! I love you too a zillion and you know that. Take care sweetie and yes seems like quite a few dears there for me..lol. Great to be in touch with you always. thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 11, 2010 at 2:51 AM
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I forgot to leave my
with you for safe keeping! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2010 at 2:50 AM
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O yes! I have done that! It was the Sears Tower in Chicago at a time when it was the tallest building in the States! It was glorious, but now I doubt I would make the trek up for heights frightens me to no end! lol This was wonderful imagery because it engages the reader from the onset! So glad I was able to read my way to your blog tonight; I think your imagery is a very special gift, it reaches out to all and captivates, too! Love you dear my dear friend, dear Shobana! Do you think I got enough dears in there me dear! lol I do love you! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2010 at 2:49 AM
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Thank you dsm, I hope so too.
posted by
shobana
on July 11, 2010 at 2:32 AM
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Well sometimes it feels that way lustorlove, thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 11, 2010 at 2:32 AM
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Thanks Sinome, glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on July 11, 2010 at 2:17 AM
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Hi Shobs, beautiful this one is ...
Ride on, ride on, ride on into the night. A very pleasing poem to the senses, done with finesse
posted by
anib
on July 10, 2010 at 11:39 PM
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Wow.. that was some ride and some poem :-) Excellent!! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 10, 2010 at 10:18 PM
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Shobana
Very nice! Did you write this after going up the CN Tower here in Totonto?
posted by
Nautikos
on July 10, 2010 at 7:32 PM
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as long it doesnt take forever to get where you are going
posted by
Lanetay
on July 10, 2010 at 6:18 PM
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shobana, Very intense feelings and pictures; yes hopefully all the kids are all right!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 10, 2010 at 6:15 PM
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Re: Stars and lovers and glass elevators....combined cleverly together.
Hi Kabu, thank you so much, I am glad you liked it my dear friend.
posted by
shobana
on July 10, 2010 at 4:49 PM
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Stars and lovers and glass elevators....combined cleverly together.
posted by
Kabu
on July 10, 2010 at 4:47 PM
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