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Re:
Thank you Simone It's going to rain Yippee
posted by
C_C_T
on July 11, 2010 at 11:48 PM
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Great read as always... :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 11, 2010 at 5:09 PM
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Re: abaneriee
Thank you Sir, I didn't read much yesterday bit under the weather.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 11, 2010 at 10:51 AM
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Re: Sam
Thank you Sam I felt as bit woozy yesterday
posted by
C_C_T
on July 11, 2010 at 10:46 AM
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Re: Bill
Thanks Bill I
like fruit salad
posted by
C_C_T
on July 11, 2010 at 10:45 AM
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6 Lots of imagery and senses sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 11, 2010 at 6:28 AM
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A second read is always so wonderful! One can get a greater appreciation, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2010 at 1:41 AM
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CornCrake
C.C. I will call this a rendition of poetry. Your style and the stamp you put in your poetries have a fragrance all their own. Kudos, Sir! Very well done ... wow, what imagery!!
posted by
anib
on July 11, 2010 at 12:45 AM
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Re:
Thank you FS we can but dream
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2010 at 11:37 PM
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Re: Really and superbly fine work...
Thank you Teddy, Be lucky
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2010 at 11:36 PM
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The relationship strikes me as having a lot of tension that sometimes bubbles up...You leave just the right amount of mystery surrounding the poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 10, 2010 at 3:47 PM
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Really and superbly fine work...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 10, 2010 at 11:32 AM
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Re: very touching and could be translated to mean a few different things
Thank you Tzippy I suppose everyone looks at things differently, but hopefully if it doesn't offend it is O.K.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2010 at 11:07 AM
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Probably not, it is only poetry of a sorts jmf, we need our illusions. It is just written for the poem it lives but a day and is forgotten.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2010 at 10:59 AM
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Re: enormous passion flowing ....I am amazed at your range of talent.
Thank you Kabu I just thought I have been washing the carpets with a machine and I wondered if the cleaning agent fumes had penetrated the system, it came with the machine. I usually use something like baby hair shampoo perhaps I used it too concentrated, probably wear off after I water the garden M'lady now the site won't work. Rose
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2010 at 10:46 AM
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Interesting multiple tangents with a sly underpinning. Are there inuendos here? With you I can never be sure. So, I'll just have what you're having.
posted by
jfm32
on July 10, 2010 at 9:35 AM
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enormous passion flowing ....I am amazed at your range of talent.
Don't you dare to leave. Sometimes what we write works better, reads better than other writing....This today is superb.
posted by
Kabu
on July 10, 2010 at 8:38 AM
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very touching and could be translated to mean a few different things
which makes for a great write, I enjoyed it
posted by
Tzippy
on July 10, 2010 at 7:50 AM
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Thank you Sam. Don't read my posts you might fall off of a cloud, I was annoyed no one read a very serious poem that I wrote before and I have these skeletons that need addressing, I don't know if I can hack this beyond my subscription Baby
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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Re: rather graphic, corncraking. By the way, I was wondering about your comment
Well you and Sam both gave me a credit when I was asking Sue a question. So I crafted you both a little bit of heaven. You see Straight, I would never joke with you because I feel you are a nice person and I always take the easy way out, if I feel someone is annoyed with me, I try to be more civil and now I have got to talk nice to Sam who is waiting patiently to give me a poke I shouldn't wonder. Be lucky
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2010 at 7:39 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Sometimes I try to think how Dylan Thomas would have spoken Bill sometimes I hit myself on the head with a book and think goodbye sweetheart .
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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CORNCAKE
@ Lots of imagery in this wonderful poetry sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 10, 2010 at 6:07 AM
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rather graphic, corncraking. By the way, I was wondering about your comment
about being kind to you. When was that?
posted by
Straightforward
on July 10, 2010 at 2:40 AM
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Told in theory, indeed! But putting it into practice is the ultimate challenge! I read this aloud and it is very, very good! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 10, 2010 at 1:31 AM
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