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Awaiting destiny...
Your poem really makes your heart swell!
posted by
2Philomena
on July 9, 2010 at 12:53 PM
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beautifully enchanting...one can almost picture "Destiny" looking on
from not too far away, ready to move with the waves of the sea, and award the one who waits.
.xoxox...
posted by
Rumor
on July 9, 2010 at 11:22 AM
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very nice
posted by
SomeoneElse
on July 9, 2010 at 10:06 AM
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this is gently enchanting
thank you for sharing xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
lionreign
on July 9, 2010 at 7:20 AM
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Gently one can become so young and for time to become real again
posted by
C_C_T
on July 9, 2010 at 6:09 AM
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just be careful in those waves
posted by
Lanetay
on July 8, 2010 at 10:49 PM
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Sinome : I can see clearly now .
# Your words become clearer and clearer in this beautiful vision love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on July 8, 2010 at 9:05 PM
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Really like how you bring in the physical sensations Makes it very personal for the reader (hey, thats me). Makes it much more than a thought. But why do I keep hearing the seeds of a novel? This kind of narative description is completley engrossing. All you need is a story, and just let this narrative come out. Just thought.
posted by
jfm32
on July 8, 2010 at 9:02 PM
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Awaiting destiny
Beautiful. Beautiful, poem..I loved it/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 8, 2010 at 4:50 PM
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me too Ariala...but then my view is very soothing as well.
posted by
Kabu
on July 8, 2010 at 4:25 PM
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A beautiful poem about the wait that some of endure...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 8, 2010 at 4:15 PM
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Very beautiful and soothing...wish I had your view!
posted by
Ariala
on July 8, 2010 at 3:47 PM
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