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Dsm a nice poem, one doesn't see kids playing Cowboys and Indians any longer. Perhaps you could ride back after a while and make your readers happy.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 7, 2010 at 12:13 AM
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The only love
Lovely poem I very much into it, feeling the love, until he turned and rode away, what heart break/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 6, 2010 at 11:34 PM
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nice sad poem
posted by
Lanetay
on July 6, 2010 at 8:54 PM
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I find this poem to be beautiful while feeling a twinge of sadness after having finished it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 6, 2010 at 6:15 PM
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It is a beautiful poem dsm, the ending so melancholic because when the rider rides on away the poem is so poignantly sweet. Thanks so much for the lovely comment and visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 6, 2010 at 4:45 PM
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