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Some journeys are arduous and this one is very representative of that! Very vivid imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 7, 2010 at 11:36 PM
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Hmmm?
How 'bout working on just dumping the load instead?
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on July 7, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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Great pace and imagery
But I think Ash has a good idea
Beautiful expression in this poem, well done
posted by
lionreign
on July 7, 2010 at 8:04 AM
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Or may be turn around & change direction?
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 6, 2010 at 7:17 AM
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