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Re: Very sweet
Thanks abanerjee for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 7, 2010 at 11:47 PM
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Very sweet
A faint sound, and then it comes nearer and nearer. This is fantastic evocation, and a very creative piece. Just loved it dost ... imagining of anklets, shobs. I'll be back to read the ones missed.
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posted by
anib
on July 7, 2010 at 10:13 PM
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Very entertaining poem and intriguing ending.
posted by
mariss9
on July 6, 2010 at 9:14 PM
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How interesting yellowrose, I am glad you envisioned them and it brought back memories. Thank you for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on July 6, 2010 at 4:48 PM
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Re: The Anklet
Hi Philomena, yes they do wear anklets too I just realized. Thanks so much for the visit and glad you liked the poem.
posted by
shobana
on July 6, 2010 at 4:39 PM
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This is lovely and made me think of a lady today withreally high heels
click click click she tapped a tune as she minced on down the street.
posted by
Kabu
on July 6, 2010 at 3:22 PM
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The Anklet
You can almost hear the music play in your wonderful poem. It reminds me of an Arabian dance.
posted by
2Philomena
on July 6, 2010 at 10:56 AM
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shobana, with every poen you become a better writer and more complete artist.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 6, 2010 at 10:12 AM
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Beautiful Shobana...I envisioned a belly dancer or gypsy.
In a life drawing class I took years ago a belly dancer came in and danced and posed while we did quick sketches.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 6, 2010 at 9:29 AM
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Anklet
Nicely portrayed Shobana. One can feel the young lady passing, joining the dance and enjoying the result. The bells creating The vision.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 6, 2010 at 8:01 AM
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this is lovely
I had never thought about anklets before, now I love the idea of them
posted by
lionreign
on July 6, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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That's a sweet one.....the anklet of bells! Soft,soothing music as the feet move around!
posted by
shamasehar
on July 6, 2010 at 6:35 AM
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Shobana
I loved this poem, and I always wear an anklet.....can't believe I've never written about them....especially since I often write about dancing! I may have to write about one soon, I'll credit your inspiration if I do! I loved the rhythm in your words and the imagery....wish it had gone on longer.
posted by
Krisles
on July 5, 2010 at 10:58 PM
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Excellent use of onomatopoeia! I love how you opened the poem with the prompt for the sound getting louder and louder! Love you dearly my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on July 5, 2010 at 10:42 PM
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Shobana
T I love the sound and movement in your imagery love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 5, 2010 at 10:38 PM
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Hi lustorlove, little bell sounds, thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 5, 2010 at 8:32 PM
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what tune do the anklets play while you dance around?
posted by
Lanetay
on July 5, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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I love your variety in what you write.
Always I never know what to expect.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 5, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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Shobana
Very well done! And I
love anklets on women...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 5, 2010 at 5:16 PM
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That was superb! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 5, 2010 at 5:00 PM
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I can hear the sound of the anklet in my mind. I find that sort of sound soothing myself.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 5, 2010 at 4:18 PM
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Wow, you had me mesmerized! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 5, 2010 at 2:41 PM
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