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Very powerful! I was deeply touched by this!
posted by
steamfly
on July 6, 2010 at 2:55 PM
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This is a brilliant poem.....but it makes me want to go out on my deck with a drink, to talk to the moon.
posted by
Krisles
on July 5, 2010 at 10:51 PM
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Sinome
at her very best......
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 5, 2010 at 1:21 PM
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Poignant, Sinome, poignant.
posted by
Straightforward
on July 5, 2010 at 11:21 AM
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Great figures of speech.
posted by
Nita09
on July 5, 2010 at 10:54 AM
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how sad
posted by
Lanetay
on July 5, 2010 at 9:09 AM
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Wow
the imagery in this is fabulous and engaging, the pace is perfect and the scene so clear that I could be in it... bravo!!! xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on July 5, 2010 at 7:33 AM
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Simone
Truly a woman with a soul and insight Simone, different but very expressive
posted by
C_C_T
on July 4, 2010 at 11:59 PM
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Marta
This is a princess-like poem, so exquisite in the use of metaphors. That Spring is the hope for the tree and of the lover's, but she knows she can't love him anymore, the pure waters that he once was has now turned bitter merging with the ocean. Beautiful work!, Marta xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on July 4, 2010 at 9:45 PM
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This is incredible, as said Ash.
What wonderful metaphors. What great reading.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 4, 2010 at 9:11 PM
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Very beautiful Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on July 4, 2010 at 7:35 PM
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so profound
so beautifully said,
posted by
skye08
on July 4, 2010 at 7:26 PM
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She did love him...selflessly, so much ....she let him go.
posted by
Kabu
on July 4, 2010 at 6:33 PM
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So very sad...yet so beautiful! Thank you for your visit, my friend.
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on July 4, 2010 at 6:21 PM
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Incredible Sinome...
several of your past few poems, so full of life & emotions..how do you keep coming up with 'em day after day!! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 4, 2010 at 5:29 PM
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This seems to be the result of many a relationship.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 4, 2010 at 4:36 PM
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