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Lovely and shining work, Dear Shobana!
Dance on..
posted by
Katray2
on July 4, 2010 at 6:04 PM
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Dance on..I'll play the music :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 4, 2010 at 6:02 PM
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The stars twinkle and are magical, you have created such delightful, magical images from them!! It would be exhilirating to run upstream with the horses or to experience the little crabs. This reminds me of finding little creatures in the creeks as a kid. Wonderful poem!! You have a distinct 
way of making these light images come alive.
posted by
mariss9
on July 4, 2010 at 7:44 AM
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What a marvelous close! I am so sorry your team is out of it, mine has been gone for awhile! What a strange World Cup this year! So many teams seemed to underachieve! Love you my Shobana!!!! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on July 4, 2010 at 7:06 AM
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Wonderful construction and pivot of 2nd (middle) stanza--that your delight and laughter brightened the stars--and so conspicuously hidden!
Who would have thought that the stars would appreciate us participating in their joy---Wow! Technically a bit of a masterpiece because every word is integral to the external exposition of form while revealing an internal vision. Quite a treat to experience someone who knows the "public secret" of what is behind a good write!!
posted by
jfm32
on July 4, 2010 at 5:48 AM
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Shobana
Z Like a jog through beautiful imagery of words love. BC=-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 4, 2010 at 5:42 AM
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Hi FSI, yes sure is. thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 4, 2010 at 4:11 AM
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Sounds a good idea lustorlove, thank you.
posted by
shobana
on July 4, 2010 at 4:04 AM
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Re: shobana
Hi abanerjee, yes they were..sigh. thanks for the visit dost.
posted by
shobana
on July 4, 2010 at 4:03 AM
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Reciprocal. ain't it?
posted by
Straightforward
on July 4, 2010 at 4:03 AM
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Shobana
Shobana I feel so happy for you, I think you would have been blown away if your teams had won. Lovely poem, I feel cheered up already.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 4, 2010 at 12:18 AM
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Even the stars
Lovely poem..I truely enjoyed it/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 4, 2010 at 12:01 AM
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shobana
Lovely sweet poem. Argentina was as if massacred. So a dance=poem is alt
posted by
anib
on July 3, 2010 at 6:55 PM
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just keep dancing
posted by
Lanetay
on July 3, 2010 at 6:53 PM
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Your poem is indeed happy,
even if you are a bit deflated with your teams losing.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 3, 2010 at 6:00 PM
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such a happy poem from a sad wee girlie......I am watching but no fave
teams left....sadly....
posted by
Kabu
on July 3, 2010 at 5:54 PM
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I find this to be quite the happy and relaxed poem you got there. Everyone should have the opportunity to experience that.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 3, 2010 at 5:03 PM
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They did admittedly..sigh. thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on July 3, 2010 at 4:06 PM
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They did play a great game :-) Sorry about your teams... and beautiful poem xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 3, 2010 at 4:05 PM
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