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LOL, TAPS! Thank you all for reading and for your encouraging comments. I'm working on the ending now, and will post it asap.

posted by adnohr on July 13, 2010 at 7:09 PM | link to this | reply

It has been more than a week now that we have been awaiting the next part.  I'm not scolding you or anything, but I sure would like to read somemore of the story before I die or something. 

posted by TAPS. on July 11, 2010 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

adnohr
This is superbly well written, and it has a strange, mysterious immediacy...

posted by Nautikos on July 11, 2010 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

That was a great story! As always! Are you thinking to publish them? Now that I am an "expert" at eBook I could help you! LOL

posted by auslander on July 7, 2010 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

wow, I had no clue you were a great story teller, this is great
keeps me reading and in suspense. Very well done

posted by Tzippy on July 5, 2010 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

you write this as if you know
--I get the idea that either you were there, or you have tremendous insight to back up a real skill with words.

posted by Ciel on July 4, 2010 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

Terrify indeed, but you do a marvelous job of telling it! I was thinking all along that they really don't change in spite of our best hopes! I can only imagine what he has done this time! Damn the drinking! sam

posted by sam444 on July 4, 2010 at 5:33 AM | link to this | reply

How terrifying all of this is.  But, you tell it in such a way that one must read.
What a writer you are.

posted by TAPS. on July 3, 2010 at 5:40 PM | link to this | reply

Adnohr
You're very good at this writing business, and it is a scary and hurtful story and if it's real I hope you either get away from it or solve it somehow.

posted by WileyJohn on July 3, 2010 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

Scary stuff. Beautifully written. Wow!
It's almost too real!  Write on!

posted by Pat_B on July 3, 2010 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

and please don'tmake me wait another week to find out what happened
I dolike it when you take the time to smell the roses...you write such great vivid alive very frightening reality....and this is real isn't it.

posted by Kabu on July 3, 2010 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply