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Thank you Sam you are a burst of sunshine. I think this computer is going home it keeps sticking.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 8:44 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
I suppose that is logical Bill what else are they for
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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You may be right, perhaps there are things we should not know! I liked how whisper was used in this awesome poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 3, 2010 at 4:20 AM
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CORNCAKE
Y Whispers keep time like the clock sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 3, 2010 at 4:05 AM
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Thank you Simone, this is yesterday some were written in an unhappy time and have to be exorcised.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 12:11 AM
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Re: it's a real priveledge to call you our distant friend.
Hi Kabu Thank you for finding the time, I was a bit annoyed afterwards for not describing why the mirror shattered. It was a brill story, it is so difficult to write to an audience on a day to day basis as I have found and especially as other things need attention. It is an awful feeling when one feels Oh no. I've got to write this and I feel like sitting with a blanket over my head. Thank you friendly friend.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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Re: jfm
Well really jmf this is a non joking site, I thought Cake was a bit fruity. I do take Credit Cards, but prefer direct debit. I will let you into a secret, there is no great talent in this poem. It is something like a love letter than one cannot send. I so enjoyed your response that I am going to learn how to compliment more.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 2, 2010 at 11:53 PM
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Re: CC
Yes Wiley, I have learned things that I wish I hadn't, be happy
posted by
C_C_T
on July 2, 2010 at 11:37 PM
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Re: Very thoughtful..
Thank you Ash your generous gesture of thought is appreciated
posted by
C_C_T
on July 2, 2010 at 11:35 PM
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Hi Darksummer it is just a matter of feeling around and finding out what is popular. Be lucky.
Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 2, 2010 at 11:32 PM
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Thank you FS. I think sometimes intelligent people such as yourself make there own poem within the poem
posted by
C_C_T
on July 2, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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This poem contains so much wisdom in its words. The speaker is an intelligent person, capable of reflecting on one's life.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 2, 2010 at 7:23 PM
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smart write. very smart write
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on July 2, 2010 at 5:10 PM
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Very thoughtful..
CC, my friend with an evolved soul, learn to listen to those whispers..in fact, learn to debate / strike a dialogue with them, because that is Divinity communicating with you in a language you know & understand..the entire Hindu Bhagvad Gita, full of eternal wisdom, exemplifies this dialogue between Krishna (Divinity) and Arjuna (Mortal). Hopefully, this also answers your perceptive query on my ealriler poem "Kites & Balloons". No, reflective souls such as yours do not get lost. Best, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 2, 2010 at 4:02 PM
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CC
"Perhaps there are things that we should not learn." I totally agree my friend
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 2, 2010 at 2:26 PM
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Hey Cake! Did you change your handle to CC--is that for credit card? (Sorry, I couldnt resist). Actually I like the change, and a good write I can relate to. I especially like the structure and voice, and the interweaving of the concrete with the passingness of experience into the more generic non-verbal part of the experience. The idea of a Whisper really works and gells this on-going possibility into somthing like a 3rd dimenion I only get a sense of, which is good enough for me. It's as if you had something appear from no place.
This poem really works for me--the title, the voice and the precision of the stanzas. If you keep writing like this, I might have to start calling you Maestro!
posted by
jfm32
on July 2, 2010 at 1:40 PM
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it's a real priveledge to call you our distant friend.
Oh and your idea for the mirror...I was so impressed, I have copied into the folder with the story as I don't want to forget your concept. Thank you oh brilliant one.
posted by
Kabu
on July 2, 2010 at 1:39 PM
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Excellent CC... loved reading this one :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 2, 2010 at 12:36 PM
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