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My heart is thumping
Ghost I don't have to worry about. Rosie is super sensitive and goes after them.
posted by
skye08
on July 3, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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Sinome
Y Hope for day feels my heart love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 3, 2010 at 3:53 AM
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love you sinome
posted by
Star5_
on July 2, 2010 at 9:08 PM
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You take the reader on one heckuva of a roller coaster ride.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 2, 2010 at 7:40 PM
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The hour is late
Lovely poem, beautifully written, I sincerely enjoyed reading it/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 2, 2010 at 2:55 PM
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Sinome
Realisitic dream poetry luv, try dreaming about laughter and humour, I'd love to see how you write about that.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 2, 2010 at 2:37 PM
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Sort of glad Iam reading this in the daytime....LOL
lovely to see you branching out in a different direction and writing still so superbly.
posted by
Kabu
on July 2, 2010 at 1:10 PM
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Dear maestro: Got the feeling you are hitting your srtide again--something like the act of writing makes vague experince something lucid. Really like the honing of your craft. If the idea of writing is to hide the artist and reveal art, it is only to ivent a srtucture where something else shines thru. I don't care if a poem is happy or sad. What I find uplifting is the art of delivery and re-experiencing a moment. I particularly like how you bring the reader (i guess that's me)into a poem/experince quite gradually, and then let it bloom. But that's the public secrete, mais no?
posted by
jfm32
on July 2, 2010 at 12:37 PM
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Sinome, a little different, and there's nothing wrong with that..
You create that eerie feeling quite nicely and then dispel it with the awakening..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 2, 2010 at 12:09 PM
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Sinome, the night has that effect on me too! Nice work here.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 2, 2010 at 8:16 AM
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An interesting poem Simone, But I would try to dream of flowers, something to soothe your heart.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 2, 2010 at 7:38 AM
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