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I am reading this poem near dawn and somehow with the birds beginning to chirp, it feels like Deja vu for me in a familiar way! It is not about the events in the poem but the aura it has created and a I sum it up with One Time, as well! sam

posted by sam444 on July 3, 2010 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you F.S for your thoughtful summary. Sometimes the reader remembers too much be lucky .

posted by C_C_T on July 1, 2010 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Shobana, I really do hope that you will find another perfect time

posted by C_C_T on July 1, 2010 at 10:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: what a beautiful reflection of life
Thank you Tzippy one must make the best of what there is

posted by C_C_T on July 1, 2010 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply

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Can't always be frivolous Bill thank you

posted by C_C_T on July 1, 2010 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

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+ You manage movement and imagery magnificently sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on July 1, 2010 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

what a beautiful reflection of life

posted by Tzippy on July 1, 2010 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent CC, a thoughtful wonder and I feel "One Time" very much.

posted by shobana on July 1, 2010 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

There are so many things that we remember so vividly along with so many other things that do not make their way into our short-term memory. The speaker does well at indicating both with the same incident, I feel.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 1, 2010 at 3:35 PM | link to this | reply