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Very sad, indeed...beautifull written, as always, though!
posted by
Ariala
on July 2, 2010 at 4:41 AM
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Sinome, GRIEF!!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 1, 2010 at 11:15 PM
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Sinome
+RIn this way the clouds are inside as well in this window love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 1, 2010 at 9:53 PM
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Sinome
Don't be sad and have a happy weekend. We love you
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 1, 2010 at 8:41 PM
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THE TINIEST UPSET BETWEEN WILEY AND MYSELF JUST
MAKES US SOMISERABLE...WE TRY REAL HARD NOT TO UPSET EACH OTHER AS MUCH AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE.
posted by
Kabu
on July 1, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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That special someone can have such an influence over our moods.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 1, 2010 at 5:18 PM
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How sad Sinome but always a new day and beginning. Lovely poetry.
posted by
shobana
on July 1, 2010 at 4:44 PM
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Loved the 1st and following lines--the wind blowing stuff around and how the imagry subtly opens up into a dreary day as if the poem opens from within. I also think the lost love thing worked ok for me because you didn't dwell upon it. Hats off!
posted by
jfm32
on July 1, 2010 at 2:44 PM
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Gray turns to bleu after a time...good writing as always, Marta!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 1, 2010 at 9:56 AM
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posted by
shamasehar
on July 1, 2010 at 8:18 AM
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Oh dear Simone, so sad today, but always remember, you did have happy days. Would it have been better to have had all sad ones, I don't think so. You see your poem has made me feel sad, so it must be OK.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 1, 2010 at 7:50 AM
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