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for some strange reason I felt very much a part of your poem. I like it. it seems to be a different break through of something.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on June 30, 2010 at 12:15 PM
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Tree
So everyone is still; sitting under the tree yes I am clued up better now, it is quite good
S.F but there's a little problem, people have short memories, perhaps if you put cont. If people like a poem they will sometimes scroll back to read previous versions. Or if you think a poem deserves more comments keep it and repost in three months time. I have done that at times and smiled cynically. So sorry about the initials, when one types with one finger and only one side of the brain, women have two fortunately. Little things jar, one chap calls me Cake, Victorian I assume. 
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C_C_T
on June 30, 2010 at 12:02 PM
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