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Not bad, Marta...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 28, 2010 at 3:10 PM
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Loved the softness in the tone of the voice. Quite a soothing song, despite experience. Also liked how you worked it out and moved it along.Was a little surprised by the end because it seemed so edifying. Now this is no big thing, but got this feeling you were actuall touching me. Put this one into your selected poems.
posted by
jfm32
on June 28, 2010 at 2:53 PM
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I realize this whenever I end a battle with depression.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 28, 2010 at 1:58 PM
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It is the mysteries of life that keeps one on their toes, that makes a person keep coming back for more when it would be so easy just to give up.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 28, 2010 at 8:39 AM
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This is beautifully written sweetie
and fate and the future are a beautiful array of colours - black is just the smallest part... xoxoxoxo
posted by
lionreign
on June 28, 2010 at 6:52 AM
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Beautifully expressed!
posted by
shamasehar
on June 28, 2010 at 5:49 AM
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What a beauty of a poem Sinome. Of course there is always that hope for dreams to come true.thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on June 28, 2010 at 4:07 AM
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Sinome
m] The art’s in finding shadows in the sun love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 28, 2010 at 3:55 AM
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Convince me please
I love it when a poet paints a perfect picture of what is going on at the time of writing their poetry. A long time ago, I danced many songs with a beautiful young lady----their was silence between us,then out of the blue we started to kiss on the dance floor. I hope that you can experience the same thing.
posted by
csherloc
on June 28, 2010 at 3:05 AM
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You write beautifully Simone, but why punish oneself. Of course you must have dreams, they are what keep people from suffering from the reality of life. Do anything you wish in dreams, as long as you do not wish to harm anyone. That's my opinion and what are we selling?
posted by
C_C_T
on June 28, 2010 at 12:37 AM
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You are a brillisnt poet and sure fate can be on your side...on the side of
love and happiness you know sweetheart.
posted by
Kabu
on June 27, 2010 at 6:50 PM
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