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Re: Shobana
Wiley John - LOL , that's cute the way you said it. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on June 29, 2010 at 1:17 AM
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Shobana
Y Live and let die love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 28, 2010 at 11:11 PM
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Oh, what a sweet life it is Shobana...just wanna share with you 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TaIpdMZN3E0
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 28, 2010 at 10:31 PM
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Shobana
I too am happy you are alive and don't want to die, and neither do I luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 28, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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Will to live is great!
Very nicely written!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on June 28, 2010 at 5:07 PM
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Thank you Shama and you are right there.
posted by
shobana
on June 28, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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Powerful and haunting work, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on June 28, 2010 at 3:04 PM
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Sing & dance I shall any day, every day ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 28, 2010 at 2:10 PM
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that was deep and interesting.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on June 28, 2010 at 1:53 PM
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interesting juxtaposition of the mixed emotion of what to feel. So here we got a dead body, and what are they thinking about? Death is interesting because we can only experience it once, and then you can't even tell anyone about, or even share the exp[erice. Now, there's the rub!
posted by
jfm32
on June 28, 2010 at 1:26 PM
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shobana, an excellent picture contrast between one who loves life and
one who despises it and wishes he/she was dead..
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posted by
Rumor
on June 28, 2010 at 9:14 AM
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Wonderfully put!!!!
i am in awe of this poem - Bravo!!!
posted by
lionreign
on June 28, 2010 at 7:53 AM
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A living death doesn't suit a romantic, bouyant person.
posted by
mariss9
on June 28, 2010 at 7:45 AM
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Great juxtaposition! Mailed today. Thanks for your visit. Nita
posted by
Nita09
on June 28, 2010 at 5:54 AM
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To live your life your way,be alive not just breathing is so important! Profound thought! Well done!
posted by
shamasehar
on June 28, 2010 at 5:42 AM
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Hey Sam
So good to hear from you Sam. I thought you would be all tired out from the get-together! Oh dear, 28 years between them and she is only 21. I can understand your misgivings especially since he is older than her dad! Gosh, she is still so young to get married. I am ok sweetie just a little hot and bothered about a couple of things!!! but otherwise I shall survive.LOL. Big hugs and love to you too Sam, thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on June 28, 2010 at 3:55 AM
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Sadly I don't think you would like to live forever Shobana, most people think I've had enough, let someone else have a go. You are in the prime of your life, so don't worry, it won't happen for decades. The only problem will be finding room to stack all your disks of poetry.Of course if we started walking backwards we might grow a bit younger seemingly, but I have
to work out why. Now you have made me feel sad for some reason, but I a good poem makes one think
posted by
C_C_T
on June 28, 2010 at 12:53 AM
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I loved the play on words! So marvelous! Well, you are my second read for the night! It turned out to be one busy day! The evening was capped off with the announcement of my niece's upcoming marriage in September! Normally I would be ecstatic beyond belief but this is a far cry from it! She is marrying a man who is older than her father, at age 49 and she is a babe of 21! It is so devastating how this man has weaseled his way into her existence! I find it shameful but I will keep my mouth closed and wish them well, but I cry internal tears for her! They want to start a family right away! He is in debt from nonpayment of his current child support and it is so difficult to get her to see the that he is not the one for her, infatuation as opposed to love! Alas, we all lie in state so to speak to use your term! How is life treating you my dear Shobana? Send big hugs and my love to you, too! Your sam
I will still get myself caught on your excellent poetry, too!
posted by
sam444
on June 28, 2010 at 12:02 AM
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that was different
posted by
Lanetay
on June 27, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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Very interestingly written. It demands attention.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 27, 2010 at 6:47 PM
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Enjoy!
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on June 27, 2010 at 6:16 PM
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Indeed Shobana... that is the only way to go :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on June 27, 2010 at 4:52 PM
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Oh yes darling...I intend to go out rocking after a great ride.
posted by
Kabu
on June 27, 2010 at 4:48 PM
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very very well said, great poem
posted by
Tzippy
on June 27, 2010 at 4:45 PM
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In State
Great poem..one sometimes needs to just chill and wait/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 27, 2010 at 4:34 PM
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We have to be ourselves, I say. The worst thing we can do is live our lives for that significant other. The speaker grasps this concept, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 27, 2010 at 4:12 PM
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