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i hope you'll get back your heart and soul soon,

or you can steal his in return!

posted by ain_natasha on July 9, 2010 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful poem! heartbreaking events in life are inevitable, but there's always hope and always something new!

posted by steamfly on July 6, 2010 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

This is an exquisite rendition of heart broken! But, a new day is always at the dawn! sam

posted by sam444 on June 29, 2010 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Leaving
Such sad, sad words..I understand for I have been there too you know..hurts real bad..but we do eventual recover, but never forget/LB

posted by MsJudy on June 28, 2010 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

sunfloweriss

m] It’s too bad that eyes can’t see so far love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on June 28, 2010 at 3:34 AM | link to this | reply

poignant

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on June 27, 2010 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

Sad but beautifully written :-)  xoxoxo

PS... in time you will realize no one can take your heart and soul... only you can give those away and as you give them you can retrieve them ... just a thought :-)

posted by Sinome on June 27, 2010 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

a + for origionality. 

posted by NIGHTWRITE on June 27, 2010 at 11:08 AM | link to this | reply

sunflowersis, and every time you can hold the pain, own it, feel it burn you, the sooner your heart escapes.  Write on.

posted by dsm_tchr on June 27, 2010 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply

This is so sad.  I know that feeling, too.

posted by lovelyladymonk on June 27, 2010 at 10:23 AM | link to this | reply

I know the feeling! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on June 27, 2010 at 10:02 AM | link to this | reply