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Comment a bit belated, but I am IMPRESSED! A masterpiece indeed..
This would be perfect for a poetry reading, Wow!..
posted by
Katray2
on June 30, 2010 at 5:31 PM
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Deadline
Enchanting dsm you can knock them out if you want to. I must read it again.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 28, 2010 at 12:17 PM
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Tremendous imagery and recount of experiences shaping mankind and individual persons!!! Truly Great. 
posted by
mariss9
on June 28, 2010 at 8:02 AM
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Very well written! Thanks for your visit. Nita
posted by
Nita09
on June 28, 2010 at 5:37 AM
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Excellent poem D... one I loved to read. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on June 27, 2010 at 8:54 PM
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Tzip, thank you!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 27, 2010 at 8:31 PM
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TAPS, he he, 4 A M is no time to be posting. Hamist? Antiporcine attitudes
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 27, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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ver very well worth waiting for, well thought out, and executed
I would say you didnt miss anything :)
posted by
Tzippy
on June 27, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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I must say, I did laugh at "We are...the hamhock".
posted by
TAPS.
on June 27, 2010 at 7:24 PM
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Very good. Well though out and executed, and very interesting to read.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 27, 2010 at 7:22 PM
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shobana, TY!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 27, 2010 at 7:03 PM
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Re: fsi, you are right. not sure what it means. my focus not food?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 27, 2010 at 7:02 PM
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I find this poem to be beautiful with the scenery and the relationship...Something that I noticed with your poem compared to the others is that the food was not really the focal point. Just a general observation.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 27, 2010 at 4:07 PM
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The best dsm - great job.
posted by
shobana
on June 27, 2010 at 3:15 PM
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Re: dsm tchr
abaneerie, Thanks my friend, your comment means a lot!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 27, 2010 at 11:03 AM
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Re: teach
Wiley, thanks, hope you have rested up from your big day!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 27, 2010 at 11:02 AM
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dsm tchr
One of the best in poetry, I can cay. Kudos! dear friend
posted by
anib
on June 27, 2010 at 11:00 AM
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teach
This was a work of artful poetry my friend....
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 27, 2010 at 10:51 AM
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Re:
LOL< meatloaf.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 27, 2010 at 10:18 AM
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but what do you like best when you eat out
posted by
Lanetay
on June 27, 2010 at 9:15 AM
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It is better to write, this wonderful poem, and only this wonderful poem
than e sillyth posts that I insert each day.
This is amazing....it so describes todays world and us with all the good and the bad. Congratulations.
posted by
Kabu
on June 27, 2010 at 8:44 AM
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We certainly are a dichotomy, we are everything. The time you spent on this poem really shows. it's great.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on June 27, 2010 at 8:24 AM
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