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another time, another life
On this road we all must travel, we sometimes seek the unattainable and wrap it tightly, like a swaddling around our hopes and dreams, at least keeping them warm for awhile longer.joab

posted by joab3 on July 1, 2010 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

Well done, Marta!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on June 28, 2010 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

"     Oh I would love to travel to your shadows
through the shores of eternal time..."

Beautiful, there are shadows I  too would love to travel too luv.

posted by WileyJohn on June 27, 2010 at 11:23 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and poignant....sorry I run out of adjectives, but your verses leave me speechless! Thanks very much indeed for your visit. Nita

posted by Nita09 on June 27, 2010 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply

lovely writing and thanks for sharing

posted by spiderfly on June 27, 2010 at 5:01 AM | link to this | reply

Very lovely Sinome.

posted by shobana on June 27, 2010 at 1:15 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written as always Simone, you have walked this way before in happiness  

posted by C_C_T on June 26, 2010 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

LThe beauty of writing poems’ that you can choose the time for your love, love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on June 26, 2010 at 11:22 PM | link to this | reply

very lovely thoughts

posted by Lanetay on June 26, 2010 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

 so near I can see the  empty half  of you and know I belong there

 superb (:

posted by ain_natasha on June 26, 2010 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
There is always something timeless and strangely forgetful about a beach...And yet, the breathing of the sea evokes memories and longing...

posted by Nautikos on June 26, 2010 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

Perhaps yes....another time in another life.

posted by Kabu on June 26, 2010 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

expose on an environmental disaster.

posted by dsm_tchr on June 26, 2010 at 6:50 PM | link to this | reply

Those relationships can seem to be so long ago.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 26, 2010 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

nicely written 

posted by NIGHTWRITE on June 26, 2010 at 5:27 PM | link to this | reply