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You have a woderful sense of language, and the movement into detail--almost novelistic. Why do you choose the shorthand of poetry and not pose? If you need a plot, let me know.
posted by
jfm32
on June 26, 2010 at 1:29 PM
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To wonder is the safest FS. Analyze at your peril .
posted by
C_C_T
on June 26, 2010 at 6:57 AM
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Re: a very tired Kabu dropped in and read and enjoyed.
Poor Kabu, I shall have to write a lullaby for you
posted by
C_C_T
on June 26, 2010 at 6:54 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
A little at a time Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on June 26, 2010 at 6:52 AM
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Re: Sam
Thank you Sam I have been trying to think of a way to show you so just to make sure
Bonny Bobby sorted balloons and blew
up another because he wanted too
see if the different colours made
a difference in the big parade.
I once failed a test a sheep was lying dead in a mountain stream where would you get your water from above or below the sheep. I couldn't see the answer because the question was stupid. I think I said I would pull the dead sheep out of the stream, Failed again
posted by
C_C_T
on June 26, 2010 at 6:51 AM
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That was a dynamic close! I did not expect it and yet it gave the poem a distinctive flair! KUDOS!! I saw your comment and you are right I was looking too deep and it was on the surface all along so to speak! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 26, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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CORNCAKE
' You have to love women sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 25, 2010 at 8:35 PM
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a very tired Kabu dropped in and read and enjoyed.
posted by
Kabu
on June 25, 2010 at 8:07 PM
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I've seen people undergo personality changes, some for the better and some for the worse...I've spent many a time wondering what prompted the change in question. People are interesting.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 25, 2010 at 11:36 AM
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