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Sinome
Loved that poetry my friend and have a happy weekend luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 25, 2010 at 8:26 PM
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interesting precision of a self-write into the practical exposition of the of the possible while keeping it close to the vest,and the tongue inside your cheek. How does it feel working in a closet and honning your idea of craft? Just a thought, how something simple can reach universality. Still got this crasy idea that yout worst poem would probablly work for me. I'm listening, so go break a leg!
posted by
jfm32
on June 25, 2010 at 6:47 PM
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The speaker has learned well from this relationship.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 25, 2010 at 12:08 PM
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Sinome Alright!
think I could fall in love with you.
I've swallowed lots of water l You express the intensity of communication in love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 25, 2010 at 6:42 AM
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Brilliantly said
and the imagery is just superb! xoxoxo
posted by
lionreign
on June 25, 2010 at 6:40 AM
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What not to do
It is probably better not to anticipate anything a lady might think Simone. This is quite a nice poem with a little watered down humor.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 24, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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What not to do
Simone/ what a wonderful peom/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 24, 2010 at 10:50 PM
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