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Sinome
Exquisitely sad luv, but so well done as always.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 24, 2010 at 9:17 PM
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This got my heart beating faster. I have felt this way about a man before. I can relate.
posted by
Darson
on June 24, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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I find it sad that the other will never know...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 24, 2010 at 4:00 PM
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well written
posted by
spiderfly
on June 24, 2010 at 1:31 PM
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Amazing, princess Marta
"those eyes I adore , too far from me" so spoken from the heart 
xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on June 24, 2010 at 9:56 AM
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Very, very beautiful!
posted by
Nita09
on June 24, 2010 at 9:37 AM
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wow
you have excelled yourself today - this is so tragically beautiful. Well done sweetie xoxox
posted by
lionreign
on June 24, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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a love too far i cant reach:(
well said
posted by
ain_natasha
on June 24, 2010 at 6:15 AM
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Dreams
Beautiful Simone but always so sad, and yet one feels that you glean comfort from these memories. It is good to be able to express your hidden feelings in your poems
posted by
C_C_T
on June 24, 2010 at 12:05 AM
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You are the most awesome writer of poems that makes a heart go racing Sinome. Thanks so much for the visit and it is good to try a new dish every now and then. I had a few Swedish friends come over and also the Cubans and they don't take spicy food so I can cook making it just right for caucasians!! Its unfortunate there's that distance.
posted by
shobana
on June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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Sinome
it does not matter if your hair is black as night
yellow as a cozy fire's light,
or white like the clouds in that sky so blue...
it does not matter because it is you, S I would love to put my heart in this down to earth advice love. Such a frame of mind turns out to be where I want to love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 23, 2010 at 10:32 PM
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I love that ...Out of my dreams...it sounds like a song
and it reads like a sad sad song...but so well written of course...again.
posted by
Kabu
on June 23, 2010 at 8:49 PM
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touched my soul with the beauty of the words
and I enjoyed it so, i read it three times, for out of your dreams manifest the most beautiful things.
posted by
Tzippy
on June 23, 2010 at 8:39 PM
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