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With the lightning and thunder subsiding, reminding you of a good bye is a superb, superb ending, my xoxoxo princess Marta
posted by
anib
on June 24, 2010 at 7:32 PM
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Beautiful!
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on June 23, 2010 at 7:53 PM
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There is a beautiful bittersweet pattern to your poetry, true to life and its ups, downs and ins and outs, its great expectations that are often disappointed.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 23, 2010 at 5:18 PM
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Exquisite poem Sinome as always. thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on June 23, 2010 at 2:15 PM
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Sinome
" You make a beautiful voyeur love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 23, 2010 at 10:16 AM
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The thought of your goodbye
How very romantic and at the same time poignant! I'll be moving from Scotland to the south coast of England on the 29th of this month so I'm sure my boyfriend could identify with the sentiments in your poem. Well done.
posted by
2Philomena
on June 23, 2010 at 10:05 AM
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Very nice...as for storms, I am beginning to favour the snow once more...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 23, 2010 at 7:25 AM
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I was sucked into this poem
And with you every tear of the way - very well done! xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on June 23, 2010 at 7:18 AM
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rain can either calm you or disturb you
posted by
Lanetay
on June 23, 2010 at 6:24 AM
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Goodbye
Touching words Simone, I suppose in storms one can relate to memories easier
posted by
C_C_T
on June 23, 2010 at 12:42 AM
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The Storm
Simone..this was such a beautiful, heartfelt poem I loved it/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 22, 2010 at 10:29 PM
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I SO love a storm!
Anytime, night or day... though at night, they create such a sense of peace in me that I mostly sleep through them. Strange, huh?
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on June 22, 2010 at 10:07 PM
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Never seeing that special someone again can be a traumatic thought.
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posted by
Sinome
on June 22, 2010 at 9:09 PM
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more beauty from dear Simone so many tears.....I used to cry in the
shower when my heart was broken that way no one could see.
posted by Kabu on June 22, 2010 at 6:01 PM | | reply |
posted by
Sinome
on June 22, 2010 at 9:07 PM
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You have captured it brilliantly - the world a reflection of the soul's turmoil...
posted by Nautikos on June 22, 2010 at 6:18 PM | | reply |
posted by
Sinome
on June 22, 2010 at 9:05 PM
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such well-fitting words (:
posted by ain_natasha on June 22, 2010 at 6:55 PM | | reply |
posted by
Sinome
on June 22, 2010 at 9:04 PM
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