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thank honeys (:

posted by ain_natasha on June 24, 2010 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

Very well done
That was a tricky rhyme scheme and you executed it well to create a sincere and honest poem

posted by lionreign on June 23, 2010 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

Ran
Great poem..I enjoyed reading it/LB

posted by MsJudy on June 22, 2010 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply