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Hi Shobana . . . Sometmes the "law of unintended consenquences" can be difficult and easy at the same moment; an interesing paradox. Orr so it seems.
joab
posted by
joab3
on June 23, 2010 at 8:49 AM
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Shobana
Yes, and there is always that element of surprise...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 22, 2010 at 7:42 PM
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I've never been in true love before, but I would imagine that is how it is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 22, 2010 at 5:40 PM
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Shobana
She asked him and he told her in as a beautiful manner as you wrote it
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 22, 2010 at 2:02 PM
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shobana
Y And what is an illusion loves BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 22, 2010 at 10:18 AM
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Yes Shobana quite intriguing, of course it
will happen to you one day, but perhaps not in such a dramatic way. You won't need to look into the distance, you will be immersed in cloud blue. No really it does add to the sensuality of the poem when you nominate yourself as the actor rather than the observer.
Yes you are believed but deliciously so, very nice work.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 22, 2010 at 8:38 AM
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Gorgeous
You have a beautifully romantic soul and an endless wealth of talent - great poem
posted by
lionreign
on June 22, 2010 at 7:28 AM
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I was so excited reading ... he sounded so sweet, soperfect I felt so happy for you ... and then you come with that "just imageries" thingie loll Well it looks to me like rather like a beautiful fantasy :-) Beautifully done Shobana :-)
posted by
Sinome
on June 22, 2010 at 6:31 AM
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One thing I will say is that if we ask the right person we will get the answer we are looking for! I loved that you put yourself in your imagery, it gave it a very realistic tone and I love it! Excellent imagery, too! Love you my Shobana! Isn't it just a blast to mess with imagery for the sake of imagery! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on June 22, 2010 at 3:22 AM
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shobana, nice work here. I like the pictures!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 22, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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Re: well it is great to read darling.
Thank you darling Kabu.
posted by
shobana
on June 21, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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Re: very beautiful imaginations you got going, but perhaps it is true
TZIPPY, thank you so much...just imagery with my name there..
posted by
shobana
on June 21, 2010 at 7:49 PM
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Hi Lustorlove - yes sometimes it is LOL. thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on June 21, 2010 at 7:43 PM
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well it is great to read darling.
posted by
Kabu
on June 21, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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very beautiful imaginations you got going, but perhaps it is true
posted by
Tzippy
on June 21, 2010 at 6:08 PM
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How lovely - Great imagery, Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on June 21, 2010 at 6:04 PM
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sometimes its a hit and run
posted by
Lanetay
on June 21, 2010 at 6:01 PM
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